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the weasil that killd

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Join date : 2008-09-27
Age : 22

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PostSubject: timikin raith   Sat Sep 27, 2008 10:05 pm

Name:timikin raith

Age:27

Gender: male

Village: n/a

Ninja Rank: Akatsuki

Clan:raith clan

Looks: no one knows what his face lookes like it is hrouded in the shadowe of his hood. but his bodey is wearing a black assassins coat and a sword on his back and a sword on his waist.

Personality: he is a calm but deadly persone he has attition problems he is afraid no one wil remember him he thinks that the only way to insure that he is rememberd by people is to kill as many people as he can

Special Characteristics:black chakara

Elements:(lightning and fire)



Jutsus: Chidori - Thousand Birds
Character Use: Hatake Kakashi, Uchiha Sasuke
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack

Dai Endan - Great Fireball
Character Use: Jiraiya
Rank: B
Note: Senjutsu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack

Endan - Fireball
Character Use: Jiraiya
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack

Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke, Yamashiro Aoba, Uchiha Fugaku, Uchiha Obito, Uchiha Itachi, Hatake Kakashi
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack

Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack, Supplementary


Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Viz Translation: Fire Style ~ Fireball Technique & also as Blaze of Glory
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke, Uchiha Itachi
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack

Kusanagi no Tsurugi Chidorigatana - Sword of Kusanagi Thousand Birds Katana
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary


Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Character Use: General Jounin Level Technique
Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Supplementary


History/Background Story: timikin had wanted to be a ninja when he grew up and his father was so prowed but one day when timimkin didnt pastthe test to become gining his dad went out spent all the they had on alcohole and hookers came home and beat his mom to death frome that day forth he swore to kill his father so he formd a plan once he became a chuning he came back to his fathers ouse and killd him with his owne sword timimkin then left konaha and joind the akatsuki

Roleplay Sample: timimkin walkd to the front door of the house he remember when he was ten. he smashd the door downe to find his dad with some hooker.... he wasnt suprisd. he told the women to leave ... she ran out the door. " hello father" he said evily "i hope your ready because im not going to take any more of your crap". his father sudenly realisd that this was not the ten year old he used to be able to just smack around. his father bolted for the back room were he kept his katana. timikin followd him. his father was so drunk he just barly got the word out then timimkin smackd it away and then he pickd it up and said " hmmmmm how long will i tourtur you oh wait i know forever" timikin tourted him for the next 2 weeks until the anbu finnaly cought him but when they finnaly found his father it was to late he died of blood lose a stab to the gut had allowed him to die finnaly. the anbu took him away or so they thought it was acully a clone and the real timimkin ascaped to join the akatsuki and has bean there ever seince.
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Join date : 2008-09-20

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PostSubject: Re: timikin raith   Sun Sep 28, 2008 2:41 am

Ok Many many things wrong with your app:

1st: Move all of this info to the Ninja Cign up section./ Follow the template for all of the stuff.

2nd: Your Jutsu ALL OF THEM. need to have a description.

3rd: Your History needs to be 24 lines long At Least.

4th: Your Rp sample seems like something that would be added to your History, so please change it and addi it.

After all that is done it MAY be acceptable.
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Josh Uchiha
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Join date : 2008-09-13

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PostSubject: Re: timikin raith   Sun Sep 28, 2008 7:19 pm

Fix everything Shadow Reaper said.
-Moved-
Also, I've beem gone for the past few days. Sorry =]
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